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Rachel Alucard doodle by FantasyRebirth96 Rachel Alucard doodle by FantasyRebirth96
this drawing was just so...unintentional its not even funny XD trust me i want to draw other blazblue characters BESIDES her. i drew her cause i want to fillip empty spaces in my sketchbook. so i drew her randomly and it was going well so i continued.

Rachel Alucard belongs to Blazblue 
Artwork belongs to Me!
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ado-mi Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aww this is really cute! I like how you kind of crosshatched the colour into the piece and the small details of the ruffles. It's not perfect but it's alright. Here are some tutorials on ruffles if you're interested. :)

Easy folds tutorial 1#
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FantasyRebirth96 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2017
Thank you very much~ Yes this will be most helpful indeed^^
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sugachi Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Well this looks good >< Seems like the only thing that isn't good yet is anatomy >< And maybe making the hair more...flowy ^^
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FantasyRebirth96 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2016
yes i see~ okay ill work even harder then~ thank you^^
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sugachi Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Good luck <3
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StaxMaye Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2016   General Artist
good job the different variations of shade is nice means everything is clear to see, the folds of her clothes is reasonably well done too. To improve it I'd recommend thinking more about how to draw things in space, the fingers for example are placed too far on the edge of the handle to have a good grip and the thumb seems to sink into the umbrella, similarly the path of the umbrella from the left and the right side of the head don't match up. It's the little details like that that make the difference :D
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FantasyRebirth96 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2016
yes i wanted to practice drawing characters with more detail even on the clothes (such as folds) yet i have a long way to go...thank you anyways :)
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StaxMaye Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2016   General Artist
folds are horrible to do at first but once your used to it your off
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Elliespy Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2016   Digital Artist
The frills and clothing folds look very nice! There's not much I can say about this one, but I have noticed that it appears that her thumb is either clipping through the handle of the umbrella or too short. Her bangs could be more separate as well.

And that's the last of the critiques! I hope I helped. :)
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FantasyRebirth96 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2016
ah thank you very much for the helpful advice :)
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Glixeworld Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2016
Wow, even your anime is good.
Even i can never draw that!
Just look at my art! Its complete bullcrap!
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FantasyRebirth96 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2016
oh thats not true but thanks :) this isn't my anime she's fem a game :)
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Glixeworld Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2016
Oh ok
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mysterysneeze Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2016
I'm not entirely sure about how I feel about Blazblue XD but I will say that the characters from that are awesome and you did an amazing job on this! :D I love how you did her hair, eyes, and this outfit has a lot of details to it that look really well done. The umbrella the way you did her holding it looks good too :)
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FantasyRebirth96 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2016
you should play the game (don't watch the anime)~

oh why thank you :)
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mysterysneeze Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2016
Thanks for the advice :D

You are welcome as well. =)
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BraveHeartTatsumaki Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This looks pretty good, seems like you put lot of time and dedication in this.
Now as for observations, you'll have to study the proportions. As someone said, the face looks chubby, and Rachel's face gives more of a serious and mature look even though she looks smaller. You gotta try to fix the hands, what I do is look at my hands and try to draw as reference, you're not in the bad path so you'll improve. The hair looks good, just try to make it more natural, when you draw hair, just let the lines go freely :) The dress looks good as the details, oh be careful with how you draw that umbrella :3
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FantasyRebirth96 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2016
yes indeed i saw she had a ton of detail so it was good practice for me :) (as well as other blazblue characters the game she is from)

thanks for the tips and feedback~
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BluAjisai Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
On the three drawings, this is the one a bit more detailed but you really have a lot of work to do if you want to improve. 
First of all you should start from the anatomy: you have to learn how to create a "right" body (male or female). 
I know that may seem a bit boring but is very important to know the basics and from that you will surely understand how poses works. 
In this one the first thing I notice is her left hand on the dress, just a bit sketched but it looks like she has claws, so pay attention to that. 
Her eyes are a bit too close but the expression in general is not that bad. 
Her hair are very stiff, so a bit of movement and maybe more hair strands would be good to be added next time. 
Especialy when you have to draw long hair, you can have fun playing with waves and hairstyles! 
The dress looks kinda ok, but again, more attention to folds for example.
Also, the umbrella is very innacurate: the "staff" looks cutted behind her shoulder, so it's like there two parts. 
And the top part is a bit wrong, but for that you can always look for real references on google and then understand how to make it.

In my opinion, as I said, a good start for drawings like this would be to learn the anatomy, and for that the best way (besides a lot of practice of course) is to look the toons of tutorials you can easily find here on dA. 
Like this one for example. foervraengd.deviantart.com/gal…
Very specific but really helpful. 
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FantasyRebirth96 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2016
ah i understand...i guess i need to add some more detail...well thanks for the helpful advice^^
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TacoheadShark Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2015
This artwork is lovely!
Now I have suggestions, which you asked for, so I hope I don't sound too harsh in advance. 
Starting from the top, the umbrella is lacking compared to the rest of the piece. Try to put detail in every inch of the art ^ ^;
And of course, looking up references of objects is never a bad idea. Just google "umbrella."
The ribbons are nice, I like those. 
The face appears to be a bit chubby, so I'd work on face shape.
I do like the hair, but it seems so static. It should be more free flowing. Just let your pencil make a wave, and then make the rest of the hair using that wave(s).
Lovely job on the dress and it's details. I suggest being a bit more careless with the dress's lower ruffles. The are some lovely dress and skirt dress tutorials, and I suggest you search for them.
The hand on the dress...the fingers are a bit pointy. work on more rounded fingers. 
Also, I do like the stylistic eyes you have here, however, be sure to look at some anime eye and face tutorials to see if you can improve in facial positioning.

Last;y, I'm not professional myself. ^ ^; With art, we're all improving. This is just my opinion on the piece. 
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FantasyRebirth96 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2015
yeah i kinda drew this WAAAAAAAAAY too big thats why the umbrella was cut off lol XD


thanks for the advice, the complements etc. :) ill work even harder!
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Mezzberry Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
Very nice work here :-)  There were a lot of little details to tackle in this drawing, and you pulled it off nicely - I think you did a particularly good job on the fringe ruffles.
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FantasyRebirth96 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2015
oh yes this was challenging and for a doodle i had some trouble with her. i might color her in someday it depends~

thanks^^
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Mezzberry Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
you're welcome :D
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StereoJester Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
okay so//I'm incredibly bad at giving critiques//and I'm a bit drunk so sorry in advance
okay so this piece is really nice C:
I like the way you shaded and it it's obvious that u worked hard on this piece
I also like that your work is very clean O.O becuz when I draw in pencils...especially incredibly soft ones since I love them most...all the piece get's dirty ;-;
if you want to improve you can look through some tutorials to learn more about anatomy and stuff..... tho //it's rly boring I neva liked tutorials about anatomy oTL
if ya want you can look through some of tutorials from my favorites XD
I like her face btw XD b-but the hair looks like it's not natural and... it looks glued sry....
also I think you could shade inside the umbrella more than outside to make the feel of shadow
that's all
sorry I know this sucks I tried
I rly dunn like giving critiques because I'm still not good enough to judge anyone so

sorry again :iconsulkplz:
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FantasyRebirth96 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2015
its quite fine no worries^^

yes i spent quite a lot of time on this making this detailed as possible:) and ill utilize tutorials more often then usually. yeah it looks kinda weird cause i drew her too big and ran out of space XD

thanks for the tips i truly appreciate it:) 
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StereoJester Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
you're very welcome omg TvT
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Millie-Rose13 Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Very detailed ^.^
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FantasyRebirth96 Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2015
thanks^^
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Drasill-Chu Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2015   Digital Artist
That's great!! She is so pretty! Her proportions are perfect! I especially loved your patience with her dress! The details are awesome ~~  I just think you could make her bangs a little longer like, a little bit over the eyebrown so it would look more natural ^^
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FantasyRebirth96 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2015
i wouldn't really say perfect but thanks anyways :)
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AngelOfStrenght Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2015
I like this one the best in your gallery the anatomy is not bad and the clothing looks really nice. The thing you can inprove (this is feedback not to trach you). Her eye's are a little too close together and her head is to round but other than that good job! I sa you like art trades, if you like ill make her also for you if you make World of Elegance from Ah my goddess for me ;)
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FantasyRebirth96 Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2015
oh gosh really?:O aww thanks:D oh ok i get what you mean and ill work harder next time^^
oh an art trade huh? oh ok ill do you that drawing^^ she looks pretty cool ill draw her! well instead of you drawing Rachel can you draw her instead?:O www.creativeuncut.com/gallery-…
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AngelOfStrenght Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2015
Sure ill make lucina for you :)
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FantasyRebirth96 Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2015
thanks :) do your best and take your time^^

can i get a better reference of this "world of elegance" person I'm suppose to draw?:O
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AngelOfStrenght Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2015
Urd is a Half goddess half demon and a goddess has her own angel the name of the angel is: World of Elegance. She has one wing black one wing wite. Im sure its on google you wil get nice pics of her. Good luck and take your time :D
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FantasyRebirth96 Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2015
so....can i just draw Urd?:O i mean no offense but i looked on google and i can't find any good reference of this "World of Elegance"

wait a minute half goddess and half demon....shouldn't that be a darksiders.wikia.com/wiki/Neph… Nephilim?:O

or am i thinking half angel and half demon.....eh

anyways if you can can you give me a link to what you want me to draw. makes my life a lot easier.

thanks :)
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AngelOfStrenght Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2015
media.tumblr.com/tumblr_ltwtzr… here you go have fun :D
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FantasyRebirth96 Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2015
thank you kindly^^ ill do my best^^
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EpicPikachu Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
Awesome shading! But you could work on your proportion. That could help out a lot. ; )
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FantasyRebirth96 Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2015
yeah good point^^ thanks ;D
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EpicPikachu Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
You've gotten better at drawing though~
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FantasyRebirth96 Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2015
oh...thanks :D
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EpicPikachu Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
No problemo~~
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sebastianmario Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2015
amazing man ^^ keep the amazing work
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FantasyRebirth96 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2015
thank you^^
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sebastianmario Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2015
no problemo -w-
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Mayleth Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2015
Nice! I think you have a good sense of detail and proportion! I would suggest try to make your line art and shadows bolder. For line art, I find it helps if at the end of your drawing, you go over the lines again, but apply more pressure. It will look crisper and helps give it that extra 'oomp', I've found.

To get the hang of shadows, you can start by referencing official artwork. Anime and cartoon style shadows are generally much more simplified than realism, so you can even look at the source material of your subject matter, such as: vignette3.wikia.nocookie.net/b…

Reviewing the shadows on hair, skin, clothing, etc. and applying that can really help bring out the drawing more. I hope this helps and keep it up :)
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FantasyRebirth96 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2015
oh wow really?:O gosh thank you kindly^^ yeah I've been thinking about bolding my sketches a little more.

oh wow ill take a look at this reference thanks:)

i might re draw her or rather just draw other blazblue characters to get better cause i like their deigns and the proportions look like my level (to an extent XD)


thanks for the helpful tips :) feel free to comment more of my drawings^^
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