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Quick Soma sketch by FantasyRebirth96 Quick Soma sketch by FantasyRebirth96
Soma belongs to God Eater
Artwork belongs to Me~
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ViviSaphira Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2017  Student Digital Artist
the proportions with this one seem to be a good improvement, and the facial expression is good too. The pose is also very well done

I'm not sure how old this character is, but if he's older then I'd say from the shoulders up it's very good. Wide broad shoulders and a thick neck are done well. To even it out tho, make the torso longer and the legs as well. Also if he is an older character then make the face a bit longer, and you could square out the chin more (i've found that most animes use a pointier chin for kids and teens and as they get older, the more square it is)

if the character is younger, than all you'd need to do is thin it out. Keep the lengths, but narrow the shoulder and neck. Then it should look fine

the last thing i'd suggest fixing is the left arm. If it's bent then make it clear where the elbow is. don't curve it so much. 
Oh and also when looking at how long arms should be, look at your own body. the elbows are near your own waist and the wrists are by the pelvis area. add the hands onto the wrist after
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FantasyRebirth96 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2017
Thank you very much^^ Eh...your right. maybe if I did a different pose I would of done a tiny better job.
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MaCia998 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
that's a nice piece ^^ the anatomy is better, keep up improving! I also like the details of that sword and of his jacket :)
don't forget to use references (they can be random photos form interent but also you can copy your reflection on the mirror!!) they're very useful, I also use them a lot! :)
 
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FantasyRebirth96 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2017
I shall look into fixing my art style some more~
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MaCia998 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
That's good ^^
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ari-6 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2017  Student Artist
I like the pose. The arms could do with being thicker though and the legs a bit longer. I usually try to make the legs half of the overall height for a guy and a bit longer that half for girls. 
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FantasyRebirth96 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2017
I have a history of short arms and such...I need to fix that really. Thank you~
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Silver-Artemis-Moon Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Cute! I love the pose, and the way the clothes look in this picture is awesome! :D
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FantasyRebirth96 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2017
Thank you so much~
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tachi-tachi Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2017  Professional Artist
Getting better! Keep practicing... draw as much as you can :D
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FantasyRebirth96 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2017
Thank you so much~
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selinmarsou Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's a pretty good concept. I like the little details you put into his outfit and weapon. His face expression is very dynamic too.
Maybe a little bit more detailed shoes? You already did great job on his outfit, so equally detailed shoes would be nice? :)
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FantasyRebirth96 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2017
Thank you so much~ Okay I'll see what I can do~
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AngelGanev Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2017
love the sword :) 
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FantasyRebirth96 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2017
Thank you so much~
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InfinitePieces Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Whoa, you have been going so much better than before !
This looks pretty nice Soma drawings ~
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FantasyRebirth96 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2017
Thank you very much^^
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