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Alisa Sketch by FantasyRebirth96 Alisa Sketch by FantasyRebirth96
I'm so happy I finally get to draw her and I wanted to for a while I so need to play God eater again when I have the time but I love her design so much^^ I'm glad this sketch came out well I thought I was gonna bomb this drawing XD

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starca Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
So, First of all, your drawings look like 4-5 "heads high". If you want it like that, fine, if not, try to draw the head a little smaller to make it feel more "normal". For this drawing, the thing that looks more "wrong" to me is her left breast that is smaller compared to the other. Also her thighs are too thin, almost the same as her arm, but you can say it is in perspective & we're looking at her from above.. But if so, make the rest of the legs even thinner/smaller.
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FantasyRebirth96 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2017
Okay! Thanks for the advice~
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sarahlrn Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2017
You sent me a message to give you advices on your art, so here we go ;)
First I apologize if the things I notice have already been said by other people.
Now let's see.
Overall you style is really nice, however I think there are a few things that you could better, especially concerning anatomy and proportions
(but it dépends if you want to work in a realistic style or not, of course ^^).
Usually for women the shoulders and rib cage are not broader than the hips (whereas men have broad shoulders and a smaller pelvis which give them a kind of "V" shape). Of course there are exceptions, but it will help to make your silhouette look more feminine. By the way, you could make her neck a bit thiner, it looks a little too big compared to the size of the rest of the body. The lower part of the drawing is good in itself, but I personally think you could have done it bigger to better match the upper part.
One good point I see is that you know where to put some shading to give more volume ; but don't hesitate to accentuate the shadows, the effect will be even better. You could even put more of it on the weapon and the girl's hair.
I really like how you did the eyes, they look vivid, and the space between them is exactly right, not too big, not too small. You also added a lot of details like the buttons and the emblem on her jacket, and that is the mark of a quality work.
For me, you did a good job on this drawing, and I'm sure that with a little more practice on anatomy you will do even more amazing things in the future :D so keep it up !

PS : sorry if there are some mistakes, I'm not a native English speaker ^^
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FantasyRebirth96 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2017
Thank you for giving me feedback! Accepted and appreciated~ Now see? I HAVE been learning how to draw women's chest but doing some light sketching, seeing which direction I wanna take it next.

I guess at the time, I wanted to focus on her weapon more than the overall drawing really...but thanks for the advice^^
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AliceChanDrawings Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2017  Hobbyist
Ok, so, I've received your message and it would be a pleasure to help you out :)! So here are my advices:

Be careful with proportions! I would recommend using a 3d reference instead of another drawing, maybe use a person or a figure, that would help a lot. I also see that you made her neck very thick, which isn't truly a mistake but because she is a girl and I see you're using an anime style, she should have a thin and feminine neck.
Other than these things, i see you put a lot of care and attention into the details and that's actually a very good thing!! I, myself, still can't bring myself into making small details and be that precise, so good job with that :D

Good luck for the future!
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FantasyRebirth96 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2017
Thank you for giving me feedback! Accepted and appreciated~ Now see? I HAVE been learning how to draw women's chest but doing some light sketching, seeing which direction I wanna take it next. But yes I need more practice on anatomy and I'm spending much more time learning^^
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killerdragon558 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Omg how could I have forgotten this! This is awesome! Plus considering I friggin' LOVE God Eater, I give a HUGE kudos to you! :D :horns:
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FantasyRebirth96 Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2017
Thank you^^
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Yurax-Mae Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2017  Student Filmographer
Alrighty~ I see you put lots of work on the weapon and turns out pretty good :D
Nice use of the hatching technique (shading)!
The only problem I can think of is the proportions are a bit off? The neck is quite thick and chest is large, while the hip is too small.
One tip when drawing female body is that the hips must always be bigger than the ribcage, while for male body is opposite (bigger chest, smaller hip).
Other than that I think she looks lovely, nicely done^^
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FantasyRebirth96 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2017
Ah I was so close to make this look great but I'm glad my shading is improving ^^ Thank you very much^^
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fayntcommissions Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2017
Love the details on the weapon!
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FantasyRebirth96 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2017
Thank you very much^^
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Kitsune-Ryu-Neko Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Alrighty. Let's see. 
First off, I really like this piece. I can tell you worked hard on it. 
You love the details don't you? Like dang...so much detail. It's awesome. 
I recommend (since this is traditionally drawn) to do a very light sketch of the pose and body first, because then the character doesn't look like they are trying to be forced to the perimeters of the page. Also so you know the character won't be off-balanced.
The clothes have depth to them and look very detailed. 
The outlining is a nice touch. 
I really like the shading-lined parts. I forgot what it was called....hatching? Cross-hatching? 
The hips look a bit small in comparison to her upper body, though. 
Keep going though, because this is a good piece. 
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FantasyRebirth96 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2017
Oh Thank you very much:]

Yeah I need to make a habit of doing light sketches and what not. I understand what your saying.
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FENNEKlNS Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh wow, very nice linework and sketching !!!!! You can really see improvement in this one!

From her waist-upwards looks great and from her waist-downwards looks great, but the top part of her and the bottom part of her don't seem to match in size, it almost seems like the breasts kinda skewed that for you while drawing. (Which is fine, it happens.)

Honestly speaking though, this one is really nice!!! I think it's the best one I've seen from you yet. -or is at least my fave so far. xD
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FantasyRebirth96 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2017
Oh I'm happy you love this! I truly feel like this is one of my best^^ Haha I won't stop you if you find this your favorite^^
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Aranren Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love Alisa a lot and the anime that came out as amazing ! 
back to your sketch it's amazing nice job with the details my friend Chiyo wow Icon  keep up the great work Chiyo Happy Icon 
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FantasyRebirth96 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2017
Thank you^^ I'll work harder you'll see^^
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Aranren Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You will <3
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kailali Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, just because you asked it to me

1) The body size is strange, but if you're working with "kodomo manga" you must start to see the right size of the lower area of the character and the structure of the body (the right breast is more smaller than the other one)

2) Try to work more with the shades, black have shades too 

3) I see a upgrading on you drawing skills, and that's good to see it, you just need to work more (like I say before) with the human body structure drawing; one of the most difficult things to do is the correctly structure of the human body

That's everything I can say, keep drawing! ^w^
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FantasyRebirth96 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2017
"kodomo manga"?

Okay I'll work more on my shading^^ I like to shade anyways^^

Thank you^^ I'll work harder you'll see^^
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kailali Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Look the concept on internet

Not problem
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AngelOfStrenght Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2017
Wauw really cool like the way you did her sword :D
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FantasyRebirth96 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2017
Thank you^^
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AngelOfStrenght Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2017
Your welcome :)
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CDQ2691 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Very cool,  I enjoy that game too.  Still haven't beat it yet
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FantasyRebirth96 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2016
Thank you very much^^
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